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Subject: Re: [office] UK Comment 4 (was UK comment 3)
Patrick, all, please not that the title of the mail I'm replying to her was wrong. The mail content does not refer to UK comment 3, but to UK comment 4. I have integrated the suggested changes into the new working draft. If not otherwise stated, I integrated exactly as suggested. Where I did not do so, where no suggestion was provided, or where I could choose one of several option, I have marked the change with an (!) right behind the page number. I also found a couple of addition spelling errors. I have marked them with an "(M)" in the list There are two suggestion where it is not clear to me what the proposed change is. These are: 402, Dropdown not error, attribute name dropdown 403, combobox not error, element name combobox The following changes have been made: 28, Tickmarks -> Tick Marks 31, an introduction -> the introduction 31, an document -> a document 32, Table 2lists -> Table 2 lists 39, it's -> it is 52, an document -> a document 86, non-layouting -> non-layout oriented processors should 86(!), Layouters -> Layout oriented processors should .... 94, an character - a character 113, prepended -> prefixed 126, See section 6.7.8 for more information on how to use this attribute -> these attributes 146, Two occurrences of text:id that have not been set using the fixed width font 164, Subentries -> Sub entries 165, subentries -> sub entries 179(M) table:print-range -> table:print-ranges 180, an default - a default 181, The sentence "To be able to specify cells for such positions as well, the <table:covered-table-cell> element exists." might be better expressed as "The <table:covered-table-cell> element exists to be able to specify cells for such positions." 182, Change "cane" to "can" 186, it's -> its 201, Change "the 2nd operation" to "the second operation" to match "the first operation" 202 of an detective operations -> of detective operations 208 an Boolean expression -> a Boolean expression 221, it's -> its 228(!), Change "sub conditions" to "sub-conditions" 234(M), an member -> a member 235(!), and 236: Change "username" to "user name" 238, "an data layout field" -> "a data layout field" 244, an member's data - a member's data 239, Change "sub group" to "sub-group" 246, row-percentage needs formatting correctly in column-percentage definition 269, assignes -> assigns 275, Bezier -> Bézier 282(!), renders -> displays 295, an relative value -> a relative value 314, Change "casted" to "cast" 328, poin -> point 330(!), The sub-paths will be filled by using eofill -> The sub-paths will be filled by using the “even-odd” filling rule 330, sub-pathes -> subpaths 332(!), Change "sub element" to "sub-element" 339, draw:handle-radius-range-minumum -> draw:handle-radius-range-minimum 340, Change "are existing:" to "exist" 341, an handout page -> a handout page 351, roation -> rotation 351, Change "y animates" to y: animates" 352, Change "whole :animates" to "whole: animages", "background,:animates" to background: animates" and "Text: animates" to "text: animates" 352, e,: -> e: 356(!) url -> URL 356(M) a url -> an URL 359, an header field -> a header field 367, and an by -> and by 374(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element" 378, tickmarks -> tick marks (three) 378, gridlines -> grid lines 391, an command -> a command 392, an command -> a command 395, it's -> it is 404, nodeset -> node-set (as per Michael McKay) 406, like an usual push button. -> like a push button. 406(!), submit for an image button -> "submit" for an image button 412, Minumum -> Minimum 417, it's -> its 417, an default -> a default 429, focussed -> focused (twice) 429, on-performaction should read “on performaction” (form attribute) 429(M), " " (duplicate blank character in row "performaction") -> " " 430, on-rowchange should read “on rowchange” (form attribute) 429(M), " " (duplicate blank character in row supplyparameter) -> " " 438, an macro -> a macro 454, Syncronization -> synchronization 451, Bezier -> Bézier 518, an list item -> a list item 523, an heading of -> a heading of 556, an higher priority -> a higher priority 557, an common style -> a common style (twice) 578, have an higher -> have a higher 578, an common style -> a common style (twice) 584(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"592, it's -> its 593, styes -> styles 594, styes -> styles 623, setps - steps 636, or an percentage. -> or a percentage. 638, it's -> it is 657, it's -> its 658, it's a pre-defined symbol type, and image, or whether -> it is a pre-defined symbol type, an image, or whether 664, tickmarks -> tick marks Michael
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