Re: [office] UK Comment 4 (was UK comment 3)

[Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg <Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM>]

All,

in addition to the changes below, I have also added a comma ',' behind the 
abbreviations i.e. and e.g. where it was missing.

Since this is a very general change, I'm not listing the changes individually 
  this time.

Michael

Michael Brauer wrote On 05/17/06 11:19,:
> Patrick, all,
> 
> please not that the title of the mail I'm replying to her was wrong. The 
> mail content does not refer to UK comment 3, but to UK comment 4.
> 
> I have integrated the suggested changes into the new working draft. If 
> not otherwise stated, I integrated exactly as suggested. Where I did not 
> do so, where no suggestion was provided, or where I could choose one of 
> several option, I have marked the change with an (!) right behind the 
> page number. I also found a couple of addition spelling errors. I have 
> marked them with an "(M)" in the list
> 
> There are two suggestion where it is not clear to me what the proposed 
> change is. These are:
> 
> 402, Dropdown not error, attribute name dropdown
> 403, combobox not error, element name combobox
> 
> The following changes have been made:
> 
> 
> 28, Tickmarks -> Tick Marks
> 31, an introduction -> the introduction
> 31, an document -> a document
> 32, Table 2lists -> Table 2 lists
> 39, it's -> it is
> 52, an document -> a document
> 86, non-layouting -> non-layout oriented processors should
> 86(!), Layouters -> Layout oriented processors should ....
> 94, an character - a character
> 113, prepended -> prefixed
> 126, See section 6.7.8 for more information on how to use this
> attribute -> these attributes
> 146, Two occurrences of text:id that have not been set using the fixed
> width font
> 164, Subentries -> Sub entries
> 165, subentries -> sub entries
> 179(M) table:print-range -> table:print-ranges
> 180, an default - a default
> 181, The sentence "To be able to specify cells for such positions as
> well, the <table:covered-table-cell> element exists." might be better
> expressed as "The <table:covered-table-cell> element exists to be able
> to specify cells for such positions."
> 182, Change "cane" to "can"
> 186, it's -> its
> 201, Change "the 2nd operation" to "the second operation" to match
> "the first operation"
> 202 of an detective operations -> of detective operations
> 208 an Boolean expression -> a Boolean expression
> 221, it's -> its
> 228(!), Change "sub conditions" to "sub-conditions"
> 234(M), an member -> a member
> 235(!), and 236: Change "username" to "user name"
> 238, "an data layout field" -> "a data layout field"
> 244, an member's data - a member's data
> 239, Change "sub group" to "sub-group"
> 246, row-percentage needs formatting correctly in column-percentage
> definition
> 269, assignes -> assigns
> 275, Bezier -> Bézier
> 282(!), renders -> displays
> 295, an relative value -> a relative value
> 314, Change "casted" to "cast"
> 328, poin -> point
> 330(!), The sub-paths will be filled by using eofill -> The sub-paths 
> will be filled by using the “even-odd” filling rule
> 330, sub-pathes -> subpaths
> 332(!), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"
> 339, draw:handle-radius-range-minumum ->
> draw:handle-radius-range-minimum
> 340, Change "are existing:" to "exist"
> 341, an handout page -> a handout page
> 351, roation -> rotation
> 351, Change "y animates" to y: animates"
> 352, Change "whole :animates" to "whole: animages",
> "background,:animates" to background: animates" and "Text: animates"
> to "text: animates"
> 352, e,: -> e:
> 356(!) url -> URL
> 356(M) a url -> an URL
> 359, an header field -> a header field
> 367, and an by -> and by
> 374(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"
> 378, tickmarks -> tick marks (three)
> 378, gridlines -> grid lines
> 391, an command -> a command
> 392, an command -> a command
> 395, it's -> it is
> 404, nodeset -> node-set (as per Michael McKay)
> 406, like an usual push button. -> like a push button.
> 406(!), submit for an image button -> "submit" for an image button
> 412, Minumum -> Minimum
> 417, it's -> its
> 417, an default -> a default
> 429, focussed -> focused (twice)
> 429, on-performaction should read “on performaction” (form attribute)
> 429(M), "  " (duplicate blank character in row "performaction") -> " "
> 430, on-rowchange should read “on rowchange” (form attribute)
> 429(M), "  " (duplicate blank character in row supplyparameter) -> " "
> 438, an macro -> a macro
> 454, Syncronization -> synchronization
> 451, Bezier -> Bézier
> 518, an list item -> a list item
> 523, an heading of -> a heading of
> 556, an higher priority -> a higher priority
> 557, an common style -> a common style (twice)
> 578, have an higher -> have a higher
> 578, an common style -> a common style (twice)
> 584(M), Change "sub element" to "sub-element"592, it's -> its
> 593, styes -> styles
> 594, styes -> styles
> 623, setps - steps
> 636, or an percentage. -> or a percentage.
> 638, it's -> it is
> 657, it's -> its
> 658, it's a pre-defined symbol type, and image, or whether -> it is a
> pre-defined symbol type, an image, or whether
> 664, tickmarks -> tick marks
> 
> Michael
> 
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