[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (SOAEERP-11) PR08-E3 WhitePaper-cd03Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow*

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PR08-E3 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow* 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-11
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-11
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
            Reporter: Paul Yang 


    * First and second sentences in Paragraph three of SubSection:
      "Service providers *offer* business services. Each service
      provider may *offer* the same service but with different bQoS and
      Ratings." "provider(s) provide" is just a bit clumsy--stylistic
      consideration only. 
    * /Description/ column entries for numbers 5 through 12 of the
      Tabular presentation of messages in SubSection: *Message Exchange
      Example:* are in a larger text size than the rest of the tabular
      material.
    * /Description/ for number 8 in tabular presentation of messages in
      SubSection: Message Exchange Example needs correction : ...*SLA*
      Request message...
    * /Description/ for number 11 in tabular presentation of messages in
      SubSection: *Message Exchange Example*: doesn't make sense to me:
      "Service Requester sends SLA Request message to the Service
      Providers to obtain the commitments from the Service Providers
      _*f**or those no SLA service in the set*_".
    * Suggestion: in last paragraph on page 10 SubSection: Message
      Exchange Example: "We conclude this section with a _*sequence*_
      diagram." 

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