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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (SOAEERP-11) PR08-E3 WhitePaper-cd03Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow*
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-11?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Paul Yang updated SOAEERP-11: ------------------------------ Component/s: PR Comments > PR08-E3 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow* > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: SOAEERP-11 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-11 > Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: PR Comments > Reporter: Paul Yang > > * First and second sentences in Paragraph three of SubSection: > "Service providers *offer* business services. Each service > provider may *offer* the same service but with different bQoS and > Ratings." "provider(s) provide" is just a bit clumsy--stylistic > consideration only. > * /Description/ column entries for numbers 5 through 12 of the > Tabular presentation of messages in SubSection: *Message Exchange > Example:* are in a larger text size than the rest of the tabular > material. > * /Description/ for number 8 in tabular presentation of messages in > SubSection: Message Exchange Example needs correction : ...*SLA* > Request message... > * /Description/ for number 11 in tabular presentation of messages in > SubSection: *Message Exchange Example*: doesn't make sense to me: > "Service Requester sends SLA Request message to the Service > Providers to obtain the commitments from the Service Providers > _*f**or those no SLA service in the set*_". > * Suggestion: in last paragraph on page 10 SubSection: Message > Exchange Example: "We conclude this section with a _*sequence*_ > diagram." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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