Re: [soa-rm-editors] editor's draft

[Frank McCabe <frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com>]

Issue 467: I figured, perhaps incorrectly, that the second clause of  
the sentence was sufficient by itself. I added the first clause in.
Issue 470: missed it.

wd-soa-rm-cd1ED.pdf

Frank.


On Feb 2, 2006, at 9:43 AM, Ken Laskey wrote:

> Frank,
>
> Great job.  I did a quick check and here are a few things that seem  
> different from the action indicated in the last issues spreadsheet.
>
> Issue 467 (and 400): I thought the resolution was "Note, it is not  
> possible to describe every effect from using a capability, and a  
> cornerstone of SOA is that we can use capabilities without needing  
> to know all the details."  Just having the end of the sentence  
> loses a big part of the message.
>
> Issue 470: we agreed to accept and don't know whether you missed or  
> had a change of heart.
>
> With this, we turn it over to our esteemed leadership to do  
> whatever is needed to have OASIS start the review.
>
> Ken
>
> On Feb 1, 2006, at 4:54 PM, Frank McCabe wrote:
>
>>
>> I think (!) ! have done all the changes, including fixes to the  
>> glossary.
>>
>> Some points:
>>
>> 1. I did not add names to the arcs. I removed the labels on one  
>> figure for consistency. If we decide to add the labels then that  
>> will not be hard to do.
>>
>> 2. Issue 446 Used essentially the text proposed by Ken to explain  
>> figure 1
>>
>> 3. Issue 468 SOA is a means ... is a lead-in :)
>>
>> 4. bolding. I tried to follow all the issue markers for bolding  
>> first occ. only. However, its is entirely possible I missed some.
>>
>> 5. added a new entry to glossary: reference architecture.
>>
>> 6. unnumbered issue re glossary entry for visibility. rejected.
>>
>> 7. unnumbered issue re glossary entry for framework. kept entry.  
>> Ok to delete AFAIAC
>>
>> 8. all other glossary amendments made as suggested (with a couple  
>> of v. minor tweaks)
>>
>> 9. action items arising from last call also completed.
>>
>> 10. Do not have the list of acknowledgments yet. Cannot publish  
>> without it.
>>
>> 11. Rejected suggestion to have a 'dummy' errata page. There is  
>> already a pointer to an errata page at start of document.
>>
>> <wd-soa-rm-cd1ED.pdf>
>> Frank
>>
>>
>
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